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In a rainy dark night, at 2 o’clock, a man was walking in the street. The man was returning home but he was very lonely. There wasn’t anyone in that place and when he arrived home, he told his wife.The man told her that he was scared because he thought that a man was pursuing him. His wife said that he had paranoia but the man didn’t believe his wife and he went to sleep very scared.
The man didn’t sleep very well because he thought that someone was pursing him all the time and he passed all the night watching the TV. In the morning when his wife woke up the husband was sleeping and the wife decided to let him sleep. When the wife came after doing the shopping, she saw that he was sleeping. The wife started worrying because the man didn’t wake up.
IN HIS OWN TRAP
In a rainy dark night, at 2 o’clock, a man was walking in the street. The man was returning home but he was very lonely. There wasn’t anyone in that place and when he arrived home, he told his wife.The man told her that he was scared because he thought that a man was pursuing him. His wife said that he had paranoia but the man didn’t believe his wife and he went to sleep very scared.
The man didn’t sleep very well because he thought that someone was pursing him all the time and he passed all the night watching the TV. In the morning when his wife woke up the husband was sleeping and the wife decided to let him sleep. When the wife came after doing the shopping, she saw that he was sleeping. The wife started worrying because the man didn’t wake up.
The man was dead, he was poisoned while he was sleeping. The wife, called to the police but the line was cut. She tried to escape but the door was locked and it had a note saying “I’m at home, find me, I’ve got the key of the door”. She hid herself in the toilet and some hours later she heard some noises. It was a man, the man who was pursing her husband, taking a knife.
The wife stayed in the toilet while she heard the man walking in the house. She was frightened, she tried to escape out of the toilet window but it was too small. The man knew that the wife was in the toilet, he opened the door but the girl wasn’t there. The man was confuse and he didn’t understand what happen. So he started looking for the wife.
He started looking in the kitchen but he didn’t see to anyone, but he saw a note near the chair. The note said: “Now, I’m seeing you and I’m going to kill you”. The man was very scared and he started running to the door. He started looking for the keys to open the door, but he had lost the keys and he started to look for a window to escape from there. Now, the man was trapped on the house by the wife.
The man fell into he’s own trap. The wife was extremely vengeful and she had already seen a film titled SAW VIII. The wife prepared the vengeance, composed by many different tortures. But the man did not know what was she planning. Suddenly, he received a telephone call of her, where she explained him what was the game about. She ended the conversation saying `` 3-2-1-0 the game has already started ´´.
When the wife started to torture the man, he started shouting and finally he took a knife, she stabbed him, and the man died. Then, the wife went to the kitchen and she took a knife and she started killing her self, and also the wife died. Finally, the man was killed and the wife committed suicide and nobody has known what happened for a long time.
I think it's a nice story, you have all kept the logic of the story and you succeeded in mantaining suspense. The end is a bit bloody, but what else could be expected? Try to check the grammar though, there are a few mistakes.
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